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Copyright: Claude SIMONIN (CLODO) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2763 W: 1361 N: 3179] (40139)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2018-06-13
Categories: Daily Life, Decisive Moment
Camera: Nikon D 90
Exposure: 1/140 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2018-06-13 6:49
Viewed: 520
Points: 24
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
In front of the Aquitaine museum, a lady was checking her smartphone, the bilboard of the museum shows Jack London looking through a sextant in her direction.

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Hello Claude,
The lady in red and the man in blue, busy with their different kinds of instruments, are nicely placed near opposite corners, giving good balance to the photo. The glass doors with words in different languages provide a nice background. It's a simple photo, as this kind of snapshots usually are, but it was well observed and there is some interesting symbolism here.

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  • lousat Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 12293 W: 126 N: 22185] (113009)
  • [2018-06-13 9:16]

Salut Claude,tres jolie composition,encore une fois tu as bien joue' avec une personne reelle et une sur les tableaux,excellent cadrage et details,tres originale comme d'habitude. Belle soiree' et merci,Luciano

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  • Nicou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 14489 W: 0 N: 16395] (176049)
  • [2018-06-13 11:19]


quelle dame assise sur ce escalier avec son phoe ces inscription sur la porte et elle est bien observée sueprbe.
Belle soirée

Hi Claude
Good juxtaposition as they were both watching something quite interesting. Well they do say good things come in little bundles... apparently. This is great street photography for the day, Congrats
Best regards

Salut Claude,
Bien vu ce titre et cette composition entre affiche et cette personne rivée sur son smartphone avec cet effet du à la position opposée dans le cadre.

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  • emka Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 10743 W: 146 N: 27061] (129607)
  • [2018-06-14 0:15]

hello Claude, well-observed scene, Jack London looks at the lady in red busy with her mobile. He would be surprised in reality.

Kind regards MAlgo

Ciao Claude
bella contrapposizione di soggetti, il tuo occhio attento ha colpito ancora.
Bella e simpatica foto.

Bonjpor Claude,

These are opportunities that don't come every day but you and your camera can spot them whenever they happen! It's a subtle connection between the blue and the red and very well composed in your photograph.

Have a good day,
Bev :-)

Salut Claude,
Une photo simple de la vie quotidienne dans une ville mais l'image est très bien équilibrée avec les deux personnages dans un angle opposé.
Amitiés, Paul

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  • Cricri Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 16186 W: 159 N: 28223] (148454)
  • [2018-06-15 6:53]

Bonjour Claude
Bien vu ! bon équilibre entre l'affiche et la dame, et toujours le bon choix du titre!
Bonne journée

Hi Claude
for some reason I enjoy these shots where there is one person on each far side of the frame....even if one of them is a poster and not real :)

it creates a false sense that the frame is wider than it really is. I enjoy that. cheers

Hello again,

Nice observation and realization: the woman and the man on the picture provide a nice counter-point to each other.

Best Wishes,

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