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Mother, daughter and the yellow shawls

Mother, daughter and the yellow shawls
Photo Information
Copyright: Elaine springford (everlasting) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 819 W: 66 N: 2286] (15914)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2011-09-18
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Nikon D90, AF-S DX VR Nikkor 18-105mm f/3.5-5.6G ED, Digital RAW
Exposure: f/8, 1/800 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Travelogue: India 2011
Date Submitted: 2011-11-18 8:44
Viewed: 2827
Points: 16
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Mother and daughter outside their house in a street in Burhanpur.
Both curious and friendly.
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Bonsoir Elaine,
Voici une superbe photo: couleur, présence des deux femmes dans des attitudes différentes, et plein de détails.
Bon W-E

Hi Elaine,

traditional life is well presented in your photo
good "models"
colours are realistic and composition good
maybe you could have added a bit more contrast but that's only my thought


Hi Elaine,
Good double portraits, perfect frame with your vertical format, interesting result with the yellow, good contrast.

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  • leo61 Gold Star Critiquer [C: 4168 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2011-11-18 9:34]

Hi Elaine!
A nice double portrait,well composed with this bucket.The yellow shawls contrast very well with the pale enviroment.
Have a great weekend!!!!!
Best regards,Leo
to Keith:
thanks for the link,interesting actual news.
Let`s see which villages I can visit,in any case Kyaing Tong seems to be a relaxed town with it`s lake and colonial architecture. a new place to discover!

All people there in India are friendly
I like their arrangement in this vertical composition
Natural expressions
Have a nice weekend

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  • BennyV Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2445 W: 34 N: 4392] (24697)
  • [2011-11-18 10:32]

Hi Elaine,

Strong mother & daughter portrait. Colours are kept soft and natural. Crop on the left is perfect, on the right I'd given a bit more space next to the bucket. The hand of the woman seems enormous. Good picture, thanks for sharing it.


Hi Elaine
a beautifully expressive study of these two wonderful ladies. So full of character and fascination. Perfectly executed with excellent clarity, sharpness and light management. A quality image and striking presentation. Well done!

Enjoy your weekend - Brian.

Hallo Elaine,
fantastisches Foto vom Leben in Asien. Dein Foto ist perfekt, gratuliere!
Viele Grüße

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